Well done this is a detailed analysis of camera work in the film. Target: you need to proofread - there are few parts that lack clarity / contain mistakes. This sentence in particular needs work: this shot 'ivesthe audience the thou'ht o isolation and destruction o which they could intertetualie and com"are with areas o "overty and/or war%
I will proofread to check for clarity issues, but the reason that the sentence that you have pointed out shows up that way is because scribd corrupts the file when viewing it from a third party website. therefore, you will have to go directly to the post on scribd itself to read it with no mistakes.
Well done this is a detailed analysis of camera work in the film. Target: you need to proofread - there are few parts that lack clarity / contain mistakes. This sentence in particular needs work: this shot 'ivesthe audience the thou'ht o isolation and destruction o which they could intertetualie and com"are with areas o "overty and/or war%
ReplyDeleteI will proofread to check for clarity issues, but the reason that the sentence that you have pointed out shows up that way is because scribd corrupts the file when viewing it from a third party website. therefore, you will have to go directly to the post on scribd itself to read it with no mistakes.
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